Ooh. I saw this linked over at kaalee's recycled fic list and almost didn't click because of the pairing, but I figured I'd give it a try. And I found it fascinating (and hot). I was surprised at how sympathetic you've managed to make Peter here; I could see how two misfits like him and Percy could be so grateful to find each other. But I also liked that there's still that foreboding sense at the end, that things still don't seem quite right. Nice work with a very tricky pairing. :-)